Grace Potton: Assessment

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Tuesday, 14 February 2012

Assessment of Evaluation posts for Q. 3 and 6 (SJA Feb 14th)

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Looking over your blog, I am pleased that you have made a really good start on the Evaluation questions Grace
There are some good attempts to make posts visual in some way, and your written comments show a generally good grasp of what each question requires of you
I really like your use of short 'grabs' from your opening sequence Grace for some of the evaluation questions
Your opening sequence is looking REALLY good Grace, and YOU have been to moving force behind the ideas and creativity - you should feel really pleased with how it is developing, make sure you invest lots of time in to your Evalution to reach those top level grades for your blog.

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To improve, and ensure that standard of your work is an A grade, you should come back to your posts and continue to develop them Grace.
I checked Q. 3 and 6 carefully, as these were the 2 that we agreed on in last Monday's lesson. There are some developments that I'd like you to do to improve each...
Q. 3 on 'Distribution' does not seem to be a single post? YOu seem to have combined it with another evaluation question. I think you need to make it a post in its own right, and really explore why Miramax is the company that is best suited to distribute your film. Include screen grabs from your own sequence and compare to grabs from 'like' films to explore what the opening sequences have in common, and why your lends itself to Miramax.
Q. 6 - For an 'A', I really think that you need to make use of screen cast software to SHOW the daily use of technology that is involved in Media (blogger, iMovie, Live type, improting, etc, etc... screen grabs...) Show your developing skill in technology to explain how you use technology daily.

Overall effort for Q. 3 and 5: VG - with IN (improvement needed)

Thursday, 9 February 2012

Teacher assessment (06-02-2012)

This is the teacher assessment of our opening sequence.

Monday, 23 January 2012

Assessment 23/1/12 MCU

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- A good attempt to make your posts supervisual. The inclusion of clips from your film is a good idea. This could be further developed into a mini documentary with voice over, which would be an excellent way to work towards level 4.
- SPAG is good.
- All four posts completed so far, but you will need to put more detail and effort into these.

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- You should discuss more than just social class for representation. What about gender? Ethnicity?
- You discuss distribution when you answer Q4. You will need to do a seperate question for distribution so instead you should focus more clearly on who the audience would be for your product.
- You could further develop your Q4 by including more detail when writing about your target audience, consider also the interests of your audience. Create a profile of your 'ideal' audience member. What do they like to do? What do they buy? How often do they go to the cinema and who with?
- You need to return to your technologies post and add in more detail.

Remember you will need all your posts to be supervisual, think about how you can do this. I would like you to go beyong prezi and images, I would like you to create a voice over commentary or a mini-documentary to reach level 4.

EFFORT - GD